#13933
Sonsie Meadows
Participant

    Hi Stephanie,

    I took your advice and did a couple of pages , and sent both versions to a trusted ARC reader. She much preferred the first person one, so I revised the whole thing… not too arduous because it’s just a little over 6000 words now. It will probably finish about 7500.

    I’m happy with the change and thanks for your help.